Working with a partner look at the student responses and try to determine Why each is progressively better than the next. Use what you know about "good writing" to explain why. Post your responses as a comment. Student #1 Student #2 Student #3 Student #4
Tyler and Spenser
4/9/2013 01:12:46 am
#1-Uses no spacing, Spells some words wrong like freedom, And does not use very strong vocab like mean, It's a weak word.
Grace
4/9/2013 01:18:18 am
You all need to tell why you think that like Mr.Holley said.
Grace, Nyandeng and Amber
4/9/2013 01:13:00 am
We think that student number four is better then all the others because they explained the law and told why they thought that idea. They also used very good details like, " I would advise you that keeping a dog on your proptery is hard work." They stayed on topic on what she was talking about why they agrees with the law.
FaItH, Caleb and Nick
4/9/2013 01:15:11 am
The last one is the best one because
Nyandeng
4/9/2013 01:21:03 am
you never give an example how they correct grammer and spelling.
Jacob S and kendall
4/9/2013 01:20:00 am
They get progressively better becuase they get longer,more discritvive,uses better grammer and explains the promt better each time.
shylah,noah
4/9/2013 01:20:09 am
1.how the 2nd one got better was it had better grammar.
Emily and Hunter
4/9/2013 01:20:15 am
1.We say that student ones work was terrible and give him a one out of four we say this because we could not even read his work, it was very sloppy and rushed also student one did not give his opinion and he needs to turn it into a email format.
Courtney,DaMontrei,Jonathan.
4/9/2013 01:21:32 am
Number 4 is different to the other prompts because first the first one has no explanation and comparing to the last one it has tons of details .Anothor way number 4 is different is that number 2 has repetition and talks about one reason only and gives the same information.Number 3 does not spell the words right,and it doesn't have grammar or introduction with an audience.
Jacob.J, Hassan, Joseph
4/9/2013 01:21:49 am
Number 2 is better than number 1 because, number 2 addresses the crowd, number 1 doesn't. #2 uses transitional phrases and words like 1st, 2nd, 3rd, #1 HAS NO NEED FOR THEM!!!
Jaylnn, Samuel
4/9/2013 01:22:07 am
Number one needs Comments are closed.
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